Thursday, 2 July 2015

my writing story

my writing goal was organisation i will now show you my story my story and show you what i did will. My story is about a cafe owner in a river fear of height's in a plan first i did not now what to writ about so i went around and ask some people.

YEA about time i have my own cafe then out of no where i heard a buzzing noise so i looked around then the noise was getting louder and louder. Then my first person  come in. What  would you like to bye OK i will get this right away.

Thank you when i go and sat down my sat was moving i looked under my sat to find what at was then i find a phone so i give him the phone and he give me my food.

I answered the phone and there was person in pairs how wants to meet me so i argued so i got a early fight to pairs the next morning. Yea i was in the air for the first time then i heard this.

this is your caption speaking we have to make an emergency stop can you plz sat down and put your seat blat on. Then we were going down really really fast.

Then we missed the air port and cashed into the river everyone was died then i said out loud to myself if i am in the middle of no where i do now i am now sacred of highest...

I have linked my phgs in have passed this because i have used my ideas  new speaker new topic new time and place

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