narrative writing

One day there was a guy who is not your average size[fat dude]. The fat dude called Phil loved to eat lots of food. His mum Bella  and his dad called Bart have been asking him to do exercise for 15 years when he went to the mall Bella and Bart called an exercise coach.

Come to the house at 5 pm.

When he saw the car he tried to run as fast as he could but his chubbiness wobbled and made him fall over.Then Bella dragged him up to the door step to introduce him to Steve 

.Phil asked what is he doing here?

,I am your exercise coach to get rid of that blubber! He replied.

But my fatness keeps me warm in the winter Phil screamed I am starting to get hungry from all this screaming.

Then Steve said I am your exercise coach now you have to run around the block first then you get a nice juicy carrot stick.

Then Phil grappled his money and went to the mall

.Steve went around the block to see if he could see Phil Steve come back 

I can't see him anywhere

.Bella said I will be back.

Brat  asked where are you going? 

I am going to the ummmm the pet shop Steve answered.

Why the pet shop 

he loves going to the pet shop 

Bella drove out the drive way. Went to the mall instead of the pet shop she saw Phil eating a large chips,a drink,a Burger and an ice cream. Then they went to the pet shop. They bought a dog called 

Books and went home.Books jumped on everyone.Then brat got so mad and asked why is there a dog.Because he hated them. Phil stared to run around the block with books then he did a 100 buries every day they decoded to meet up at the forest and did some buries and when he went home he had something to drink and went on the the bike after hours he finally decided he liked exercise

The solo level I have reached for surface features is: Relational because I think I used lots of full stops and capital letters.

The solo level I have reached for my narrative is: multistructural because I think I used very good topic in my narrative.

My next step is to do make at not to long so people do not get bored or stop reading and make them want to stay and read more about the stories.

Leadership

Peer mediation I think I have done really good and when I see people up set I go and see if they want some help if they don't I just walk away. My next step is to look friendly and smile and to stop giving  the person I am on with not to give them the iPad all the time.

team reflection

My reading goal is to:Get good at reading and good at skim and scan. I think I did really good  because I can find things faster my next step is to skim faster. My new goal is to get better at reading.My evidence is national donut day

My maths goal is:to now my 8,9 so I can get a good job. I think I am doing really good because I have leant my ,3,4,6,7 time tables. My new goal is to now convert gm and kg. My next step is to say my time tables faster 

My writing goal is to writ explanations. I think I have done really good because I can now writ explanations. My next step is to writ better reports

Egobaby

W.A.L.T: I can Include topic specific vocabulary to enhance my explanation 

Would you trust a well know company? Ergobaby  is just one company that has been effected by someone breaking the consumer guarentees act.The consumer guarentees  act is there so consumer act and business do not get ripped off one I will explain a business that broke the consumer guarantee act and the effected on the consumer and the business  like ergobaby would you want to redress the ergobaby you bought.Well some you can send back and some you can't.A right that has been broken is that goods must  be of acceptable quality.She could have put her baby in the baby carrier and looked away her baby might have fallen out backwards and the baby could have hit has head and died or got really bad head damage.Then shr would of wasted her money and couldn't get it back.Consumers have the right to believe that their goods are fit for purpase. The baby carrier should be able to  carrier babies but it couldn't because the buckle can't hold the weight of the baby. The website said it should have held babies but they lied and consumers should not be lied to. They lied by selling fake Ergobabys 

Reading

W.A.L.T:find,select and retrieve information. 

National donut day on June the 6  is national donut day since the only way to celebrate this important holidays is by eating the sweet rings you really have no choice but to devour a few or even a few dozen

My art

WALT:draw in perspective.

In my art I used blue on my sky with some white so you can tell that at us a sky with the mountain I used black for my road and green for the grass here is my art

  Hope you like the art
My next step is to do my painting nice and slow so at does not go in have the trees

Walt creative writing

The funniest in the world:the funniest thing is at camp when I could not get up on the high ropes so my mum had to get me up then j fell off so we did at in tell I could stand up