punctuation

In writing I have been learning how to do punctuation I will now write done my into and my pg 1 and 2

I strongly don't think that children shouldn't wear a uniform. Would you like to get telled what and not to wear everyday? And what about the money at would not cost that much money if you couldn't wear a uniform. Would you like to look the same as everyone? But I think that wearing a uniform sometimes could be good idea.

Uniforms cost to much money. What would happen if you could just afforded to pay for the school and stationery? Some people just cant afford to by a uniform. And some people don't like to wear a uniform. But if at is a no uniform you should only wear a uniform for a field Trip